Hello, Benjamin from Brothers Campfire here!
I have a few things this morning. First of all, I wrote this a couple of years ago. Will you please critique and let me know if you would like content like this? I write these types of things privately.
As for private, Cassa Bassa asked about current YouTubes.
I am live streaming on my way to work. If you have notifications turned on for Brothers Campfire on YouTube, you can chat with me and I will respond on camera.
If they have good content worth seeing, I will post them here afterwards. This is not visible by YouTube, but rather exclusive to my favorite people!
This was live-streamed, and if a watcher commented, I would have spoken to them.
The other day was wildly successful. My parents were listening and I had seven other veiwers chatting with me. It was pretty nifty. This is the channel to get notifications on.
I like the personal feel of blogging and fostering relationships. I do not wish to be a viral YouTuber. I learned that the hard way a while back. One of my videos circulated through work and it actually did me a disservice when it came to being taken seriously.
Those that are serious about seeing a more rounded-out version of me can stop by Brothers Campfire and take the time to read.
Well, I am swamped with work and need to be there early. I will see you all soon!
34 thoughts on “Please Critique My Content”
I am a poetry and journal reader rather than a fiction reader. Perhaps because that’s quickly read.
However, it’s well written.
Sorry I missed this comment!
Way cool. Can you critique the poetry in the link provided, called Painted Places?
Good, interesting contrast between your prose and poetry. I’d say, you can do both. Perhaps some more white space between paragraphs and you’re ready. Good read 💛
Very nice and awesome post 🌷🙏♥️the eyes you painted wonderful 👍🏻🌷
and written lines also nice to read 😍👍🏻 All The Best 👏🌷
Most welcome and Blessed Friday 🌷🙏♥️🌷
I like the song parts best.
A Toast, to all Patrons and Fellow Pukes!
Ha ha …me as well.
Hi Bejamin! I couldt’t be at the time, for chating, sorry.
Great share, thank’s! I love your ceramic, good desings.
Have a relaxing time!
Thank you! Have a beautiful day Elvirrra!
You are welcome, Benjamin!
Beautiful day too!
I have personalised my YouTube notification now. I worked out how to do it. Will see…
Way Nifty! 🤠🔥Thank you!
I have short attention span so short poetry is my thing. Your blog and Ana’s blog http://blessedwithastarontheforehead.com
and Terveen’s blog
are the only three ‘long’ blogs I read.
Wow! Well thank you! 🤠🔥
What I meant was I don’t read stories when they are ‘long’ like 3 paragraphs. It’s just me.
Way cool! Thank you for the heads up!
More more more please – of it all!! 😁🖤
I enjoyed your youtube videos.I think your writing has been excellent.
I appreciate it! You are an excellent writer! 🤠🔥☕
Interesting fact last 2 cross country trips there were zero bibles in the hotels. This time every room had a bible
That is nifty!
The Gideons have been prevented in a few places
That is interesting. The kids were the ones to notice
Great Catch! I wish there were more Bibles in hotel rooms.
Those are the most humongous eyes EVER! I’m having trouble with my internet connection. It must be jet lag or culture shock.
Well, alrighty then!
It’s honestly well written. The Barbarian beekeeper made me smile, though. 😊 As for the YT videos, whenever I have time, I get to watch it. But I’d just like to say, please be careful while driving. Stay safe, my friend!
Thank you! I appreciate you!